You do deliver this.
A nice little short, although I found it a bit too blunt at times.
The Dog burying the Frisbee made me laugh, and for the most part I enjoyed the whole thing.
The style you chose suits it perfectly, and to the backdrop of music only, added allot to the effect.
Oh it's how you do it.
I ended up being sucked in despite not enjoying the premise at first. But you did it so well, the drawing/animation was great but it's how you generally expressed everything that I really like.
The way you tell the story in a not-so traditional light, and the little pokes here and there.
(And I didn't really notice the sound going out of sync either)
These shorts are the reason I spend so much time on the portal, I'd never find see them otherwise.
So, I hope to see more of your stuff in the future...
A bit overused...
It's an old old joke, but you did it well. And kind of differently to most....
PS: Loved the music.
Wheee...
That was fun. You're semi-musical narrative has me addicted.
Hmmmm....
Please keep submitting wont you?
Ok
You have a nice idea for a flash here. And No i'm not going to comment on the political aspects.
Since you're obviously... enthusiastic about the idea you need to spend some time and animate it. It's never going to get through if you just have the lyrics scrolling up the screen. Put some work and thought into the flash and show us your visual interpretation beyond the point of national flags and symbols. Make the visuals as dynamic as the music.
Ok?
OK
(It will take some time though)
You have allot of potential.
But you really need to work on the drawing side of things. The character design and the first scene when he's watching TV had a nice style going there, but you completely ruined it with most of the rest of the movie. Just be more patient and draw the things yourself instead of using the line tool, it looks so much better.
Aside from that.... I liked the Humour, you give thirteen year olds a good name for once, if you really are thirteen anyway.
I liked the scene when he's glaring at the service guy, it's kind of rare (On NG) that you see people using dynamic editing to compliment a mood.
Soooooo... Next time, improve the drawings and try to have a bit more of a plot, or at least work on making it flow together more naturally.
thank you alot for the review I'll follow your guidlines and maybe try again
So....
You like to submit the submissions at the time appropriate to it's title?
Nice quick light-hearted one, though I fear the blam.....
ha! yeah. i've been staying up a little too late recently -you're as bad as me.. i've gotta delete flash from my computer for a while or something. it's a little too addictive.
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