Hard to decide
I like your animation style, that's an easy one.
The rest of the flash though.... Well, the voice work was really bad, but you already know that. Fortunatly it doesn't really affect these kind of flash's too much.
But the dialogue and script itself kept jumping in between the cliched/immature and light hearted wit. So I don't know weather the good parts were an accident or not.
But the enjoyable moments were still there nevertheless, so you get a good score.